Roller Coaster Commercial Rough Cut

So i finally able to lock down the idea of this mechanical pencil with roller coaster. Here is the link to the rough cut. Feel free to comment on anything. There still are some parts that will need to be fix, for example the hand moment will be recapture, and the logo transition need to be modify for a bit more fun way. However the outcome of the roller coaster commercial turn out better then i thought....Here is the link to the quicktime (right click/save as if you want to save a copy, its 36mb)