Modification On Storyboard

So after couple feedback of the beginning sequences of the animatic. I decided to re-draw out the scene in multiple of option.
Option 1
-Option 1 will start off with a shoot of cloudy sky, and the next sec a jet cut in to the shoot. Then the jet will speed and fly away, follow with the rest of animatic

Option 2
-Option 2 is an establish shoot of the jet & hanger. So in the time frame of 1 sec, you will get the back story of the jet taking off and flying away.

Option 3
-Option 3 is the combination of both option 1 and 2. Instead of sky shoot at the beginning, we will have a bird eye view of the hanger. The next second the jet will cut in to the shoot. Then the jet will speed up fly toward to the camera and fly away.



After the live shoot, i was at a point very confuse of how to establish the shoot of composite shoot of pencil and hand much easier. Here i draw out one of the idea of how to fix this problem. Instead of waiting the pencil slowing land on to the hand, we will have a hand show up at the bottom of the scene. The hand then will gently adjust to the position of drawing then moving out the frame.